FAMILY REVENGE
Sarah was in her bedroom when the mobile phone rang.It was Mark, her boyfriend and he said to wait him in the park to have dinner in the restaurant.It was a rainy day, so Sarah took the raincoat and she went to the park. She got to the park earlier than the time she was supposed to be there. it was dark because already was 8 o’clock and the lamppost didn’t work. Suddenly someone touch her back, and she turned thinking that would be Mark,but in that moment something hit her head...
Sarah fainted and when she woke up, she didn’t know where she was. Incredible but she was in one car with two mysterious boys. They were speaking between them, and suddenly the girl heard: “We will leave in the forest, and later...”. Sarah was frightened, she didn’t know what to do, so she started shouting. At that moment, the car stopped in front of one big house and a tall woman appeared from the door. The woman went directly where Sarah was.
At that moment, she recognized the women. She was her neighbor that lived alone in a enormous house that was dirty and full of trash, it seemed that it was abandoned. She lived exactly in the following house and Sarah’s parents and all her family thought that she was a little bit mad. She was scaring and whenever Sarah went past her she always thought that she hated her and wanted to kill her. At that moment Sarah was sure.
The women blindfolded Sarah’s eyes again. She walked on the noisy wooden floor, and downstairs to a cold room. Sarah heard metal things hitting each other; the noise was horrifying. After some minutes, the women tied Sarah’s hands to a strange chair and she said: “Unfortunately you have to pay all you have done.” And with a frightening laugh, the women uncovered Sarah’s eyes. Sarah opened her eyes slowly because of the strong light, and she saw that she was surrounded by metallic tools. The women was thinking on torturing Sarah.
Sarah started shouting but anyone answer her. And the women was coming near and near with the scissor in the hand to cut Sarah’s fingers. But when she was going to cut the first one, Sarah shouted:
-I didn’t do anything!
At that moment the women stopped and said:
-You steal my parents!
-That isn’t true!
-Yes, you are my sister and when you born our parents abandon me.
Sarah was so surprised that start crying.
That is false said Sarah. The women started cutting the first finger when suddenly Sarah’s mobile phone sound. The women stopped the torture and took the telephone.
-Hello? Said the women.
-Sarah? I’m Mark I’m waiting you two hours. Where are you?
-I’m not Sarah and I’m going to kill your girlfriend.
In that moment the women heard another voice. He was one police that said that it was localized and Mark put the telephone down. The first Sarah’s finger was cut when suddenly the policeman's appeared and rescue Sarah. It was terrifying but Sarah wasn’t killed whereas her finger was cut.
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Written by:
- Maddi Beloki
- Olaia Cincunegi
- Ane Abalabide
- Lore Lakunza
- Josu Galarza
- Aitor Zubeldia
This story is written by a group composed by 6 member's. Each member wrote a paragraph so 6 different stories were created , all of them with 6 paragraphs that were written by different people.If you want to see my original story click here.And if you want to see my group mates stories click in the following names:
